假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词入加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As is known to all that millions of graduates crowded into the job market each year.
But because of the financial crisis, the situation of the employment has become very
serious. Consider this, some people suggest graduates should have a lower career
expectation, such as working in the western area of China. I in favor of this idea.
Firstly, compared with the big cities, the competition is not as fierce there, but
graduates can easy get a job. Secondly, the lower position may offer graduate
more space. All in all, going to the west maybe bring more benefits. Devote
yourself to the west, for it is both good for our personal development and for our
country at present.