假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

    修改：  在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

          2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

     This afternoon I went to see my grandfather by a bus．It was very crowded and I had to stand．Besides me，there was a woman hold a little boy in her arms．In front of her, a young man occupies two seats，pretending to be sleeping．I heard the little boy curious asking his mother, “What’s wrong with the uncle?” I had thought if perhaps the woman would blame the man．Beyond her expectations，the woman answered with a smile，“Be quiet．This uncle must very tired because of hard work．”The young man must have heard the word．His face turned red but offered one seat to the woman at once．

 This afternoon I went to see my grandfather by a bus. It was very crowded and I

had to stand. Besides me, there was a woman hold a little boy in her arms. In front of

           Beside                    holding

her, a young man occupies two seats, pretending to be sleeping. I heard the little boy

              occupied

curious asking his mother, “What’s wrong with the uncle?” I had thought if perhaps

curiously                                              if改为that或去掉if

the woman would blame the man. Beyond her expectations, the woman answered with

                                  my

a smile, “Be quiet. This uncle must ∧ very tired because of hard work.” The young

                              be

man must have heard the word. His face turned red but offered one seat to the woman

words                 and                          

at once.                                             

【答案解析】

1.by后的冠词去掉

【命题立意】考查固定短语

【解析】by bus坐公交，bus前不需要冠词。故by后的冠词去掉。

2.Besides → Beside

【命题立意】考查介词

【解析】besides除……之外；beside在……的旁边。故Besides → Beside。

3. hold → holding

【命题立意】考查非谓语动词

【解析】根据there be + 名词 + v-ing有……正在……。people是hold的执行者，应用现在分词。故hold → holding 。

4.occupies→ occupied

【命题立意】考查非谓语动词

【解析】根据上下文语境应用过去时。故occupies→ occupied。

5curious → curiously

【命题立意】考查副词

【解析】根据asking。故or → and。

6.if→ that或去掉if

【命题立意】考查宾语从句

【解析】根据语意此处thought的宾语从句应用that引导，也可省略。故if→ that或去掉if。

7.her→ my

【命题立意】考查代词

【解析】根据前文的I判断此处是“出乎我的意料之外”。故her→ my。

8.must后加be

【命题立意】考查情态动词用法

【解析】must为情态动词，其后必须跟动词原形，very tired为形容词，应加be。故must后加be。

9.word→ words

【命题立意】考查名词

10.【解析】word为可数名词，根据前文所说的话，word应用复数形式。故word→ words。

10but → and

【命题立意】考查连词

【解析】根据but前后是并列关系。故but → and。