每位同学都希望自己具有良好的人际关系,成为班级中受欢迎的人。
每位同学都希望自己具有良好的人际关系,成为班级中受欢迎的人。请你根据下表所提供的信息,写一篇题为“Being a Popular Student”的英语短文,参加学校网站英语论坛的讨论。
受人喜爱的个性品质 | 对待集体 | 热心班级活动,具有团队精神,工作负责,…… |
对待他人 | 尊重、关心他人,富有同情心,…… |
对待自己 | (请考生自己实际拟定内容,列举至少两点) …… |
注意:1.对所给要点,逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2.词数150左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
Being a Popular Student
We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers.
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One possible version:
Being a Popular Student
We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers. To enjoy popularity, we are supposed to regard the class as our big family and even offer to sacrifice our personal interests whenever necessary. While taking an active part in all our class activities, we should work responsibly to build up a good reputation as a team.
To be students with high popularity, we are to show respect, concern and sympathy for others. As a result, we never hesitate to lend a hand to those in need.
To be a popular student, we ought to be strict with ourselves in everything we do at school and make every effort to achieve all-round development, being good not only at our lessons but also at sports, music, painting, social services and so on. In time of success we remain modest, while in time of difficulty we keep strong-minded.
All in all, popularity among classmates and teachers comes naturally to those who keep improving their personal qualities.
解析:
本篇书面表达非常贴近学生实际生活,话题内容能够让学生在结合在校生活经验的基础上运用所学知识,表达自己的思想。
1.注意几个关键信息和特点:
A.三个表述方向“对待集体,他人和自己”
B.对待自己方面要求“列举至少两点”
C.本文有一定的开放性,能让学生更多的施展才华,彰显个性,但要注意方向性和限制性,不能乱表达。