I’m very happy to hear from you, but know that you are visiting China next month. I will be freely at that time and I’m eager to meet you. Please tell me your flight numbers and arrival time so I can pick up at the airport. My plan went like this. During the first week, I will take you to Beijing with a purpose of showing you around the Great Wall and much famous royal palaces. Then in the followed week, we’ll go to Yunnan Province. We can experience the traditional customs and beautiful scenery here. If you have any suggestion, please contact with me.
I’m very happy to hear from you, know that you are visiting China next month. I will be at that time and I’m eager to meet you. Please tell me your flight and arrival time so I can pick up at the airport. My plan like this. During the first week, I will take you to Beijing with purpose of showing you around the Great Wall and famous royal palaces. Then in the week, we’ll go to Yunnan Province. We can experience the traditional customs and beautiful scenery . If you have any suggestion, please contact with me.
第一处:but →and。考查并列连词。前后分句之间是顺承关系,而不是转折关系,故用and。
第二处:freely →free。考查形容词。此处应用形容词作表语。be free是固定短语,表示"有空的"。
第三处:numbers →number。考查名词单复数。flight number表示"航班号",根据语境,这里指一个航班号,所以应用名词单数。
第四处:pick后加you。考查代词。pick sb. up表示"接某人"。
第五处:went →goes。考查时态。本文的基本时态是一般现在时和一般将来时。此处为客观叙述,应用一般现在时。
第六处:a →the。考查冠词。with the purpose of doing sth.是常用搭配,冠词要用the表示特指,该短语意为"目的是……"。
第七处:much →many。考查限定词。此处修饰可数名词复数palaces,故用many。
第八处:followed →following。in the following week 表示"在随后的一周里"。followed作定语表示"被跟着",显然不符合语境。
第九处:here →there。考查副词。根据语境可知,此处表示在云南,故应用there。
第十处:去掉with。考查介词。contact"联系"是及物动词,后面可直接加宾语。
