假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同

    假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

    文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

    增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

    1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：

    2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I'd like to telling you something about the problem of pollution we were facing. As we know,

the factory besides our school gives off heavy smoke all day long. very loud noise hurts for our ears.

Rubbish and waste are thrown here or there. It also sends out polluted water and poisonous gas. All

 these has done great harm to the healthy and study of the students. But as time goes on, little has

 done to change the situation.1 don't think we can study well if the problem is solved. We do hope

 you'll help and support me.

I’d like to telling (tell) you something about the problem of pollution we were

(are) facing. As we know, the factory besides (beside) our school gives off heavy smoke all day long. Very loud noise hurts for (去掉for)our ears. Rubbish and waste are thrown here or (and) there. It also sends out polluted water and poisonous gas. All these has (have) done great harm to the healthy (health) and study of the students. But as time goes on, little has ∧(加been) done to change the situation. I don’t think we can study well if (unless)（或者is后+not） the problem is solved. We do hope you’ll help and support me. (us)