I can’t swim because I have a strong fear of water. Look back 1. ________ my childhood e

　I can’t swim because I have a strong fear of water. Look back 1. ________

　　my childhood experiences, I think that three reasons might          2. ________

　　explain the fear. The first reason is that I was not allow to go       3. ________

　　near the water when I was a child, for my mother had a            4. ________

　　unreasonable fear of it. So, even as a child that I was taught to     5. ________

　　see the water as something danger. Second, my eyes               6. ________

　　became bad when I was five. If I took off my glass in the           7. ________

　　water, I couldn’t see anything, or this increased my fear.           8. ________

　　The worst part of my experience is that as a child I saw            9. ________

　　a neighbor drowned. After then I have been more frightened.      10. ________

1. Look→ Looking

2. my前面加on / upon

3. allow→ allowed

4. 第二个a→ an

5. 去掉that

6. danger→ dangerous

7. glass→ glasses

8. or→ so

9. 本行无错

10. After→ Since

1. 此处应该用现在分词作状语

2. look back on / upon是固定短语,意为“回顾”

3. 此处应该用被动语态。

4. unreasonable fear是以元音音素开头,故用不定冠词an

5. 此句是简单句,that是多余用词

6. 形容词修饰复合不定代词

7. 复数名词glasses意为“眼镜”

8. 此处表达因果关系

9. 本行无错

10. 介词短语since then常与现在完成时态连用。