增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下写出修改后的词

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分

I went shopping yesterday afternoon．It is seven o'clock when I was going home by bus．The bus was full of passengers，all of which kept silent．A mother with her little son was sitting nearby．All of sudden，the son cried loud．The mother tried to do what she could to make him stop crying．Thus，the son went on crying．After a long time，a man sitting next of the mother said angrily，"Why don't you give the child what he wants it．"The mother answered quietly，"I would if I could，and what he wants is your hat．"Heard this，all the passenger burst into laughter．

1．is改为was．考查时态，这件事情是发生在昨天下午的，故使用一般过去时，be动词应用was．

2．which改为whom．考查疑问代词，此定语从句"all of whom kept silent"的先行词为passengers，为sb．，故应用whom．

3．sudden前加a．考查固定搭配，all of a sudden突然，为固定搭配．

4．loud改为loudly．考查副词，cried为动词，修饰动词的为副词，故应改为loudly．

5．Thus改为However．考查连词，根据前后语境"母亲用尽一切办法让小孩不哭""小孩不停哭"表明母亲的办法不管用，为转折关系，故改为However．

6．of改为to．考查介词短语，在…旁边为next to．

7．去掉wants后的it．考查从句，本句what he wants为定语从句，what已指代了他想要的东西，故it多余．

8．and改为but．考查连词，前后句"如果可以我一定给他""他想要的是的帽子"前后位转折关系，故改为but．

9．Heard改为Hearing．考查分词，hear和all the passengers为主动关系，故用现在分词做时间状语，故改为Hearing．

10．passenger改为passengers．考查名词，所有的乘客，乘客应为复数，故改为passengers．