In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports were steady, around three per weeks(

In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports were steady, around three per weeks(week). When however, on Monday, January 16. a science fiction film about visitors to outer space was shown on television, there was the  immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States. The commanding officer, Wayne Tyler, who directly responsible for the study of all such reports, decided to making  his findings known. They wrote an article, which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements. Follow this explanation, there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings, because the rate remained above the previous level.

【答案】In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports were (was) steady, around three per weeks(week). When however, on Monday, January 16. a science fiction film about visitors to (from)outer space was shown on television, there was the (an) immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States. The commanding officer, Wayne Tyler, who (was/is) directly responsible for the study of all such reports, decided to making (make) his findings known. They (he) wrote an article, which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements. Follow (Following) this explanation, there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings, because (although /though/but/yet) the rate remained above the previous level.