假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。 

修改: 在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；      

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I used to feel I was the sun in my family．But when my cousin was born，everyone had paid more attention to her．So I disliked her and couldn’t get along well with her. With time went on，I realized how ridiculous I have been at that time．I tried to find a proper time to apologize．When my cousin’s family came to my home a few day ago，I took my cousin to play outside．In the way to the playground．I bought much snacks for her．Then we began chat．When we talked about their childhood，suddenly，I said“sorry”gently．She was silently，so I thought that she hadn’t heard me clearly．But after while she said：“Don’t say that．In my memory，you are always friendly．”

I used to feel I was the sun in my family．But when my cousin was born，

everyone had paid more attention to her．So I disliked her and couldn’t get along well

with her. With time went on，I realized how ridiculous I have been at that time．I tried

        As  或 went改为going                  had

to find a proper time to apologize．When my cousin’s family came to my home a few

day ago，I took my cousin to play outside．In the way to the playground．I bought

days                                On

much snacks for her．Then we began chat．When we talked about their childhood，

many                          chatting                  our

suddenly，I said“sorry”gently．She was silently，so I thought that she hadn’t heard

                                     silent

me clearly．But after ٨ while she said：“Don’t say that．In my memory，you are

                  a

always friendly．”