假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同

    假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

    增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

    修改:在错的词下划横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

      2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

      3.必须按答题要求做题,否则不给分。

Dear Zhou Lu

I'm writing a letter ask you for some help.

As you knowZhang Fei and I used to be good friend. Howeveron one dayZhang Fei read my private letter in secret and tell others what was written in it. Knowing thisI was extreme angry. I told her I would not be his friend any more. Hearing what I saidZhang felt very surprised and no longer stayed with me. Facing with thisI felt very upset. I am much angry with her improper behaviorso I can't forget the wonderful time when I stayed with her. I wonder whether I should forgive her. And I'm afraid if I offer to make friends with hershe will refuse me. How should I do?

Your friend

Li Hua

答案

Dear Zhou Lu

I'm writing a letter ask you for some help.

As you knowZhang Fei and I used to be good .Howeveron one dayZhang Fei read my private letter in secret and others what was written in it. Knowing thisI was angry. I told her I would not be friend any more. Hearing what I saidZhang felt very surprised and no longer stayed with me. with thisI felt very upset. I am angry with her improper behavior, so I can't

                                                                  but

forget the wonderful time when I stayed with her. I wonder whether I should forgive her. And I'm afraid if I offer to make friends with hershe will refuse me. should I do?

Your friend

Li Hua

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