假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Linda,
How is everything going with you?I’ve returned to Shanghai,tiredly but happy.I can’t thank you enough for all the kindness you offered during my stay in New Zealand.
When I first got to there,I found hard to use English properly.It was you who always helped me with patience.Now I have made such a great progress that I can speak English more fluent.I even have a large vocabulary than before.I am not scared of English any more.
When I am homesick,you kept me company,chatting,playing games or showed me around the scenic spots.You made me felt as if I were one of your family members.There are so much wonderful memories fresh in my mind.
In addition,please remember me to your parents.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Yu Lei