假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

  2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I want to tell you an impressive story happening during my first lesson.On hearing the bell,the students ran into the classroom as quickly as they can.But a boy,Li Ming,which father had died a month earlier,was late for the class. He quiet stood outside the classroom.I smiled to him and let him come in.After a while,he cried on his desk. Then I walked to her and asked what had happened.He told me that his mother was ill and that he has to buy some medicine for her.At the same time,he apologized me for his lateness.Moving by his words,I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song named "Mother" for the students.How time flied!Class was over when I realized it.From the story I felt we should show a respect for our parent and do our best to help them.

I want to tell you an impressive story happening during my first lesson.On hearing the bell,the students ran into the classroom as quickly as they can.But a boy,Li Ming,which father had died a month earlier,was late for the class.

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 He quiet stood outside the classroom.I smiled to him and let him come in.After a while,he cried on his desk.Then I

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walked to her and asked what had happened.He told me that his mother was ill and that he has to buy some medicine

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for her.At the same time,he apologized ∧ me for his lateness.Moving by his words,I praised him for his deeds and

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decided to sing a song named "Mother" for the students.How time flied!Class was over when I realized it.From the

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story I felt we should show a respect for our parent and do our best to help them.

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