Dear Editor.
I’m a middle school student named Li Hua. I’m writing tell you
something. Recently I noticed that many of my schoolmates often go to
the Internet bar near our school. The other day, I went there, either.
I was surprising to see many students playing computer games, seeing
movies or were chatting. Some students were even sending love letter
online. In my opinion, Internet bar should be a place which we can find much
usefully information. Internet should be a window to the outside world
rather than a place for playing games. Internet is good unless we make good
use of it. Otherwise, they will do us great harm. So the local government
should take measures to make sure of the “safety” of students in the
Internet bars.
A possible version:
Your letter reached me yesterday. It said in your letter that you were punished for using cellphones, which puzzled you.
There is no doubt that cellphones can bring us much convenience. We can keep in touch with friends and families wherever they are. Besides, the cellphone is a way to fun.
However, there are some problems with using cellphones. The ring of phones can disturb teachers and students in the class. It has been proved that often using cellphones does harm to health. Another problem is that some students can spend too much time and money on cellphones and sending messages, which will result in bad results in study.
As a student, he should concentrate on study. It is right for school to prevent you from using cellphones.
