假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。

修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分

A person who we should learn from doesn’t need to be rich and famous. It could be the person we live with him. For me, it’s my father.

I still remember the days when I was child. Although he had plenty of works to do, but he still stayed with me and played children’s games with me. With time go by, I’m in Senior 3 now. It is me who have no time to stay with him now! However, he is still behind me and try his best to make a better life for our family. How handsome and selflessly he is! I am really very grateful for him.

In my mind, he is not only my father, but also a hero living with me!

A person who we should learn from doesn’t need to be rich and famous. It could be the

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people we live with them. For me, it’s my father.

            them去掉

I still remember the days when I was child. Although he had plenty of works to do, but he

                               加a                          work       but去掉

still stayed with me and played children’s games with me. With time go by, I’m in Senior 3 now. It

                                                       going

is me who have no time to stay with him now! However, he is still behind me and try his best to

   I                                                             tries（trying）

make a better life for our family. How handsome and selflessly he is! I am really very grateful for

                                           selfless                           to

him.

In my mind, he is not only my father, but also a hero with me!