I like music very  much, pop songs particularly. Every evening then I am doing homework an
                    
                
                
                
                    I like music very  much, pop songs particularly. Every evening then I am doing homework and at  weekends when I at home, I always play some of my favorite songs on my tape  recorder. The familiar patterns of notes attracts me into the colourfully world  of music. Now and then I stopped to follow the songs. Sometimes, my mother  comes in, asking me to fix my attention to my homework. She does not like the  pop music. Like most grown-ups, she enjoys folk songs, because the 
peaceful music reminds her of their beautiful life when she  was young. It is a truth wh
ich people  of different age understand music differently and enjoy different kinds of  music.
 
               
               
				
                    短文改错:I like  music very much, pop songs particularly. Every evening then (改when)I am doing homework and at weekends when I (加am )at home, I always play some of my favorite songs on  my  tape recorder.. The familiar patterns of notes attracts(改attract) me into the colourfully(改(colourful或colorful) world of music. Now and then I stopped(改 stop) to follow the songs. Sometimes, my mother comes in, asking me  to fix my attention to (改on)my homework. She does not  like the (去the)pop music. Like most grown-ups, she  enjoys folk songs, because the peacef
ul music  reminds her of their (改her)beautiful life when she was  young. It is a truth which(改that) people of different  age (改ages)understand music differently and enjoy  different kinds of music.