假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Bill enjoyed shoot very much, but he was never good at it．One day his friend was named
Jack visited his house and saw a new target Bill had put several days ago in his garden．Jack
went nearer but saw a hole in the middle of the target．When jack asked who had shot at it,
Bill said he had．“How far away are you? Two feet?” But Bill said he was 50 yards away．
Then Bill’s wife explained Jack the hole．He said, “Bill went to a shop and bought a piece of
wood．He put it in the garden and shot at it from 50 yard away, only to shoot a hole．Then he
drew a target round a hole．”