假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
    删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
    修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
    注意：
    1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；   2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Alice is a good friend of me. She was born in a small town near London on the November 3rd 1980. Her father was a worker and her mother was a teacher in England. When we were in Grade First, her family moved to Shanghai. Her father find work there．

Now her father works in a big factory. Her mother is still teacher in China. She doesn't lives in Shanghai. Everything in Shanghai is very dear. Her home lives very far from the school. So they have to get up very early in the morning every days and go to school by bus. Because she is new here, she has a few friends here. “Life is not so happy here,” she often tells to me. I think I should help Alice.

51．根据句意（Alice是我的朋友）可知of后应用名词性物主代词，所以me→mine。

52．日期前不用冠词，所以the去掉。

53．一年级应该是Grade One,所以First→One。

54．find→found.时态不对。

55．单数可数名词teacher前应加不定冠词a，所以still后加a。

56．lives→live. 前面已有助动词does, 所以lives要改成原形live

57．lives→is . far是形容词，要和助动词be连用。

58．days →day

59．a去掉，因为Alice刚来，所以，她的朋友不多。

60．根据句意（他总是对我说。）可知此处指说的内容，所以tells→says。