五月的第二个星期天是母亲节。请你制作一张贺卡,表达对母亲的感

五月的第二个星期天是母亲节。请你制作一张贺卡,表达对母亲的感恩之情。要求:依照下面画线句子写两句话,做到内容谐和,句式大致相同。

       妈妈,你是我疲惫中的一杯香茗,当我昏昏欲睡时,浓郁的馨香使我神清气爽。

答案

你是我低迷时的一曲清音,当我意懒神迷时,优雅的旋律使我心旷神怡。你是我迷茫中的一盏灯,当我徘徊歧路时,璀璨的光芒让我豁然开朗。

   (比喻,1分;喻体是具体的事物,1分;第二个分句是显示“我”的情况,1分;第三个分句是所选具体事物的特点或作用,1分;语意流畅,1分。)


解析:

此题考查仿写句子的能力。仿写句子时一要注意例句的外在形式,即保持形式上的一致或相似;二要注意隐性的限制,如句子所使用的修辞手法,很明显这里使用的是比喻的修辞,且把母爱比喻为一种具体的事物,而后面所说的应符合所选事物的特点。

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