假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry的学校组织学生去希腊游学,他非常想去,但是遭到父母的反对,对此,他非常失望。请你发邮件安慰他。内容包括:
1. 理解他的心情;
2. 建议他和父母谈谈;
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Terry,
I’m sorry to hear the news and I understand how disappointed you are feeling.
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Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Terry,
I'm sorry to hear the news and I understand how disappointed you are feeling.
I know you' re quite interested in Greece and you've always been dreaming of visiting there. It's such a good chance to realize your dream.
Have a talk with your parents, again. You can tell them about your feelings and explain why the trip is important to you. What's more, your school can make sure you' re safe and you' ll call or text your parents regularly throughout the trip. Last, you can tell them what you've done to prepare for the trip.
I hope you'll get your parents' permission and enjoy your trip!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】
第1步:根据提示可知,假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry的学校组织学生去希腊游学,他非常想去,但是遭到父母的反对,对此,他非常失望。请你发邮件安慰他。内容包括:1. 理解他的心情;2. 建议他和父母谈谈。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):be interested in(感兴趣);dream of (梦想);have a talk with (与……谈话);make sure (确保);prepare for (准备)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】
范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如Have a talk with your parents, again.运用祈使句。Last, you can tell them what you've done to prepare for the trip.运用了宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。