Dear Nick,  I am glad to hear that you are coming to Sichuan in August 8. And     1.

Dear Nick,

 I am glad to hear that you are coming to Sichuan in August 8. And     1. ________

I think you made a wise choice to travel here. Sichuan province  is     2. ________

rich in attractions and enjoys many famous places of interests.         3. ________

Jiu Zhaigou is well known for it’s beautiful lakes, of which            4. ________

the water is clear but looks colorful. It can excite visitors’             5. ________

imagination .Another attraction is Dujiangyan which was built         6. ________

2000 years ago and was still playing an important in irragation         7. ________

today. Besides, the nice weather a can make your trip much            8. ________

enjoyable. I am sure that you have a good time.                     9. ________

   I am looking forward to your come.                           10.  ________

1. in 改为on

2. made前面加have

3. interests改为interest

4. it’s改为its

6．正确

7. was 改为is

8. much改为more，或much后面加more

9. you后面加will

10. come改为coming

1. 具体日期

2.文章时态是一般时态

3. place of interest 中interest是抽象名词，没有复数

4. 形容词性的物主代词

5. but改为and  

5. 此处表示并列

6．正确

7.句子后面是today，所以用现在时

8. 前后比较。

9. 表示将来

10.---的宾语，动名词复合结构，做介词to宾语。