假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号＾，并在其下面写出该加的词

删除 ：把多余的词用斜线﹨划掉

修改：在错的词的下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词

I went to the Internet bar near our school the other day. To my surprise, I saw many of my classmates or friends there, watching movies, listening to music or talk with strangers in the chat room. Some seem to be enjoying playing computer games online. In my opinion, the Internet bar should be a place which we can search with useful information we need. And the Internet bar should be a window for us learn more about the outside world instead of a place for a fun. The Internet can benefit us great if we make good use of them. I hope schools should take effective measure to prevent students from spending too much time on the Internet.

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Internet can benefit us great if we make good use of them. I hope schools should take effective

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measure to prevent students from spending too much time on the Internet.

Measures