假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改 10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Wang Mei,

I’m sorry to hear about your problem. Don’t be too concerning about it. Now I’d like to give you some advice. Firstly, you may have the heart-to-heart talk with your roommates. Perhaps they will realize their mistakes or correct them. Secondly, if you find hard to have a good talk with them, you may write a letter about them. Lastly, if these ways don’t work, you’d better to report it to your teacher, whom will help solve the problem. Good communication is the key to deal with the relationship with others. Maybe someday you should become good friends. I hope my advice will be of greatly help to you.

Best wishes!

                                                                       Yours,

                                                                       Li Hua

答案

Dear Wang Mei,

I’m sorry to hear about your problem. Don’t be too  about it. Now I’d like to give you some advice. Firstly, you may have  heart-to-heart talk with your roommates. Perhaps they will realize their mistakes  correct them. Secondly, if you find hard to have a good talk with them, you may write a letter them. Lastly, if these ways don’t work, you’d better to report it to your teacher,  will help solve the problem. Good communication is the key to  with the relationship with others. Maybe someday you  become good friends. I hope my advice will be of help to you.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

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