假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌

假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

          2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

     All of us know the old saying “Practice make perfect.” It tells us unless we want to realize our aim, we should practise, and a day we will make it. It’s easy to understand. Once I wanted to learn swimming. At first I found difficult to control my body. I just sank into the water. I feel very frightened. Then I watched others which were good at it and asked them the key to succeed. I went to the swimming pool every day, learned from them and practised. One day, when my friend pushed me into the swimming pool, I sudden found that I could swim. How exciting I was! Now I can swim much more better than before.

  All of us know the old saying “Practice make perfect.” It tells us unless we want to realize our aim, we

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should practise, and a day we will make it. It’s easy to understand. Once I wanted to learn swimming .At

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 first I found ∧difficult to control my body. I just sank into the water. I feel very frightened. Then I

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watched others which were good at it and asked them the key to succeed. I went to the swimming pool

             who                                     success

every day, learned from them and practised. One day, when my friend pushed me into the swimming

pool, I sudden found that I could swim. How exciting I was! Now I can swim much more better than

      suddenly                         excited

before.