假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以

假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中 共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。

It was the Christmas. I saw a 7 or 8 year old boy wearing a man’s overcoat what covered him from neck to toe. The sleeves of the coat cut short causally to match the boy’s arm long. I went to the nearby shop. As I had a son of a same age, I knew the size. A few moments later, I bought a nice pair of trousers, with a matching overcoat. Wearing Santa’s hat, I went back and give the new clothes to her. The unexpected joy on his face thrilled me. Unplanned charity brings a strangely sense of contentment that money can ever buy.

答案

It was the Christmas. I saw a 7 or 8 year old boy wearing a man’s overcoat what covered him from neck to toe. The sleeves of the coat ︿cut short causally to match the boy’s arm long. I went to the nearby shop. As I had a son of a same age, I knew the size. A few moments later, I bought a nice pair of trousers, with a matching overcoat. Wearing Santa’s hat, I went back and give the new clothes to her. The unexpected joy on his face thrilled me. Unplanned charity brings a strangely sense of contentment that money can ever buy.

1.    was去掉;

2.    year改为years

3.    what改为which

4.    coat 后加were

5.    long改为length

6.    a改为the

7.    give改为gave

8.    her改为him

9.    strangely改为strange

10.          ever改为never

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