假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一

假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该辞词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词；

      2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

  Mary,

Thank you very much for invite me to your birthday party in Saturday evening. I’d love to come and I have to go to the countryside to see my grandparents. They were very old and unluckily not in good health recently. My mother has been already called them and promised visit them with me this Saturday. We would stay at my grandparents’ the whole weekend. So I’m real sorry I can’t make it. I hope you will understand. Here I wish you a lot fun on your birthday and many happy return of the day!

Yours ,

Jim

Mary,

Thank you very much for invite me to your birthday party in Saturday evening. I’d love to

                         Inviting                    on

come and I have to go to the countryside to see my grandparents. They were very old and

     but                                                  are

unluckily not in good health recently. My mother has been already called them and promised∧

                                                                          to                                                          

visit them with me this Saturday. We would stay at my grandparents’ the whole weekend. So I’m

                               will

real sorry I can’t make it. I hope you will understand. Here I wish you a lot∧ fun on your

really                                                        of

birthday and many happy return of the day !

                 returns