假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除和修改。　　

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。　　

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。　　

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。　　

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　　　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Tom,

I’m glad to hear from you. I know your parents want you be a student with artistic skills. Needlessly to say, a student with some artistic skills is more popular in school as well as in society. Having some artistic skills also help understand and master the general subject, such as math, English, and so on.

Therefore, interest is much more important. If you show no interest in it, you are more likely to learn it well. And it won’t help you much. Some day in the future, you will regret making such a choice.

In my opinion, you should follow my heart. You should do whichever you are doing well. If you learn your academic subjects well, you can still enter into a famous university. Art is not the only approach to succeed.

Dear Tom,

I’m glad to hear from you. I know your parents want you∧be a student with artistic skills.

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society. Having some artistic skills also help understand and master the general subject, such

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as math, English, and so on.

Therefore, interest is much more important. If you show no interest in it, you are more

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likely to learn it well. And it won’t help you much. Some day in the future, you will regret

making such a choice.

In my opinion, you should follow my heart. You should do whichever you are doing well. If

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you learn your academic subjects well, you can still enter into a famous university. Art is not

the only approach to succeed.

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