假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共
有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加 、删除或修改。
增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
My car just wouldn’t move any farther. It was complete dead, and I was a few miles away from my home in that cold, wet night. I decided walk around a little before accepting I’d have to spend the night in the car. Maybe I can find a telephone. Actually, I didn’t have to walk far before I
found the small house standing in a field with a light sh one from the sitting room. I knocked at the door and was delighting when a pleasant old man opened the door but listened to my story carefully. He said he had no telephone and that it wasn’t any within walking distance, but the old man who offered to go to repair my car.
My car just wouldn’t move any farther. It was complete dead, and I was a few miles away from
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the night in the car. Maybe I can find a telephone. Actually, I didn’t have to walk far before I
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door and was delighting when a pleasant old man opened the door but listened to my story delighted and
carefully. He said he had no telephone and that it wasn’t any within walking distance, but the old
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man w\ho offered to go to repair my car.
1. complete 是形容词，这里需要副词修饰形容词 dead。所以把 complete 改成 completely. 2. 具体说道哪天或怎样的晚上，介词要用 on 而不是 in.
3. decide 后面接动词不定式做宾语，所以要加动词不定式符号 to。
4. 根据上下文，这里是描述过去的情况，所以用过去时。
5. 因为上下文是第一提到这个小房子，所以应该用不定冠词 a。
6. light 和 shine 构成主谓关系及主动关系，所以应该用现在分词而不是过去分词。
7. delight 的用法是 sb. be delighted，表示感到高兴的。
8. 根据上下文，这里不是表示转折关系，而是并列关系，所以把 but 改成 and. 9. 这里是 there be 句型，表示存在。
10. but 后面是和前文形成的并列的句子，表示那个老人家提出去帮我修理车，并不需要定 语从句，所以 who 是多余的，应该删除。
