假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该次下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限词。

2.只允许修改10处错误,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Thursday 15th June,1944

Dear Kitty

I wonder if it’s because I haven’t been able to be outdoors for so long which I've grown so crazy about everything to do with nature. I can well remember that there was a time when a deep blue sky, the song of the birds, moonlight and flower could never have kept me spellbind. That changed since I came here.

 …For example, one evening when it was so warm, I stayed awake in purpose until half past eleven in order to have a good look at the moon by myself. But as the moon gave far too much light, I didn’t dare to open a window. Another time five months before, I happened to be upstairs at dusk when the window was open. I didn’t go downstairs until the window had to be shut, The dark, rainy evening, the wind, the thundering clouds held me entire in their power, it was the first time in a year and a half that I’d seen the night face to face…

…Sadly… I am only able to look at the nature through dirty curtains hanging before very dust windows It’s no pleasure look through these any longer because nature is one thing that really must be experienced.

Yours,

Anne

答案

1.which改为that

2.flower改为flowers

3.spellbind改为spellbound

4.That后加has

5.in purpose改为on purpose

6.before改为ago

7.entire改为entirely

8.the nature删去the

9.dust改为dusty

10.look改为looking

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