假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I went shopping yesterday afternoon. It is seven o'clock when I was going home by bus. The bus was full of passengers, all of which kept silent. A mother with her little son was sitting nearby. All of sudden, the son cried loud. The mother tried to do what she could to make him stop crying. Thus, the son went on crying. After a long time, a man sitting next of the mother said angrily, “Why don't you give the child what he wants it.” The mother answered quietly, “I would if I could, and what he wants is your hat.” Heard this, all the passenger burst into laughter.

I went shopping yesterday afternoon. It seven o'clock when I was going home by bus. The bus was full of passengers, all of kept silent. A mother with her little son was sitting nearby. All of sudden, the son cried . The mother tried to do what she could to make him stop crying. ， the son went on crying. After a long time, a man sitting next the mother said angrily, “Why don't you give the child what he wants it.(删掉it)” The mother answered quietly, “I would if I could, what he wants is your hat.” this, all the burst into laughter.